I made a couple of modifications on my script, as after reading through it over and over again, I felt like I had too much dialogue. My idea is to let images tell the story and dialogues could make the film look less professional as the actors will not be real actors, therefore it might be complicated for them to talk in front of the camera. I decided to add a voice-over as well, as I thought it would give an extra touch to the film.
Eric, you have made some definite improvements with the second draft of your script. I agree that the removal of much of the dialogue helps the script to flow better, and maybe be better given that you are using amateur actors.
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